This is my elevator pitch, same as last time.
Reflection from last Elevator Pitch:
I received relatively positive feedback on my last elevator pitch. Those who reviewed my pitch noticed that I included statistics in my pitch, and enjoyed that because it really helped back my point in my pitch and the importance of my product. The only feedback I didn't realize I would get was based off my constructive criticism. I don't realize that I move around a lot in my videos, and I wasn't aware that it was distracting either. I tried better this time, but I think that the reason I do it is because I am not super comfortable making these videos and having to talk for 90 seconds straight. But, I do appreciate the critique because it will improve future pitch videos.
Hi, Julia fantastic job on this version of the elevator pitch. I could clearly see the improvement that you made to your presentation. Also, your passion for this topic was radiant and definitely as a potential investor that caught my eye. However, I did notice background noises that sounded like bells. This, at times during your presentation, distracted me and took away from your content.
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