Hi Julia, I really like your elevator pitch! You gave great insight and statistics into the topic of concussions. The statistics gives me a better idea of how much these concussions are really affecting players and how much there are each year. The stats shows a lot more people who are affected than I thought there was. It is really interesting and something we should change to reduce the amount that happen.
Hi, Julia! You had a really great elevator pitch. You started off with a hook that got me intrigued since many people that I know and including myself have had concussions. You also were really animated and you provided a great deal of information that helped me better understand the severity. One thing that really stood out to me is that you seemed very passionate about your cause.
Hi, Julia, great job on your elevator post. You are definitely knowledgable and passionate about this topic and your solution to it. One thing I recommend you do in the future is to work on your presentation posture. While you were talking, you were moving around, and this was certainly distracting to me. However, overall your presentation was high quality and engaging.
Hi Julia,
ReplyDeleteI really like your elevator pitch! You gave great insight and statistics into the topic of concussions. The statistics gives me a better idea of how much these concussions are really affecting players and how much there are each year. The stats shows a lot more people who are affected than I thought there was. It is really interesting and something we should change to reduce the amount that happen.
Hi, Julia!
ReplyDeleteYou had a really great elevator pitch. You started off with a hook that got me intrigued since many people that I know and including myself have had concussions. You also were really animated and you provided a great deal of information that helped me better understand the severity. One thing that really stood out to me is that you seemed very passionate about your cause.
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Hi, Julia, great job on your elevator post. You are definitely knowledgable and passionate about this topic and your solution to it. One thing I recommend you do in the future is to work on your presentation posture. While you were talking, you were moving around, and this was certainly distracting to me. However, overall your presentation was high quality and engaging.
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