Elevator Pitch No. 3, my wisdom teeth are coming in currently so please forgive stutters/pauses.
I received relatively positive feedback on my last elevator pitch. Those who reviewed my pitch noticed that I included statistics in my pitch, and enjoyed that because it really helped back my point in my pitch and the importance of my product. The only feedback I didn't realize I would get was based off my constructive criticism. I don't realize that I move around a lot in my videos, and I wasn't aware that it was distracting either. I tried better this time, but I think that the reason I do it is because I am not super comfortable making these videos and having to talk for 90 seconds straight. But, I do appreciate the critique because it will improve future pitch videos. I also noticed the sounds in the background, these are my cat Elvis' bells on his collar. It was difficult for me to record this without hearing them despite him being in the next room.
Hi, Julia, I have watched all three of your Elevator Pitches, and I have seen you improved so much after each one. You certainly listened to each round of feedback and have made adjustments to your presentation based on this. In your presentations, you and confident, informative, and direct to the point. All of which are factors that attract investors
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